stultiloquentia (![[info]](http://www.insanejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} stultiloquentia) wrote, |
Here! I'm here! *pant pant*
“I have Ghandi respect, and profound Ben Kingsley lust.”
Bwahaha!
Lots of great lines in this. Malfoy the Activist is a charming idea, and I like Harry needing to learn how to bring his bravery and fire to different types of battles. I also really liked Ron's cameo, and wished for more of him and Hermione. Friendship kink, yes, hi.
I thought some of it was a bit repetitive; the story's (really excellent) message got lost now and then in all the wordage. I know you were rushing to shove it out the door on time, which, gawd, do I ever understand.
Mostly, I just sat back and enjoyed Malfoy's flouncing. You have such a talent for dialogue.
“I have Ghandi respect, and profound Ben Kingsley lust.”
Bwahaha!
Lots of great lines in this. Malfoy the Activist is a charming idea, and I like Harry needing to learn how to bring his bravery and fire to different types of battles. I also really liked Ron's cameo, and wished for more of him and Hermione. Friendship kink, yes, hi.
I thought some of it was a bit repetitive; the story's (really excellent) message got lost now and then in all the wordage. I know you were rushing to shove it out the door on time, which, gawd, do I ever understand.
Mostly, I just sat back and enjoyed Malfoy's flouncing. You have such a talent for dialogue.