Aww, I can't believe you put dear O'Sexy in there just for me!

I liked it very much. Your Draco is a lovely person and I'm fascinated by your treatment of him. And of Harry, actually. You don't have any fan-worship of him, so he's allowed to be the viewpoint character and yet be full of blindness and foibles. Of course I'm more interested in the moral issues than the H/D, but I don't mind that, either.